Excellent. Your work lends itself to narrative well. I'm always disappointed when something like A Fools Errand or Volunteers doesn't continue. Hopefully this will have a longer life.
Anon "Hmmm.... posted my appreciation yesterday but it's gone. Great stuff anyway."
It went to the spam folder for some reason o_O, I know it sucks, but given the extra time invested in these stories I can't do them too often, and there's always the possibility that some of the participants leaves or something else happens.
I'm not sure you check older posts to actually see this, but I'm gonna post some feedback just in case you do. I liked the set as another one of your sets - but I can't say I liked it as a Catwoman set. If that makes any sense. The set is really nicely put together, with some nice panel composition and the model looks as hot as your models always do.
And yet, after the first few pages there's nothing there to indicate it's supposed to be Catwoman. Which, to me, kind of defeats the purpose in doing a parody/reference set in the first place. I think Catwoman is just a bad choice of character in that regard though. There's nothing distinctive about her hair, her body, her accessories etc. to clearly mark a given character as her once you've taken off the catsuit. I think you should have either had her keep the catsuit on (even though I'm not a fan of that particular suit's design - especially the hood) or used a character with more distinctive design elements altogether. Wonder Woman would be good for this for instance, since even if you take off her clothes she has rather distinct accessories you can keep one or two of in the form of her belt, bracers, tiara and earrings. Or Zatanna, who you just need to keep the top hat on for really. And so on.
Additionally, I think it was a bit pointless to include the nurse given that she didn't actually participate in events. Chekov's gun and all that. You'd probably have been better served (and had a bit of an easier time making the set) if you just had Selina tending him from the start. Finally, I would point out that it's a bit of an odd writing choice to have Selina cast as a villain, in a group of villains - and then have her keep talking about heroism. Those lines just seem odd to me, and would probably work better rephrased to say that she's rewarding Grodd for his help or something instead.
I could complain that the sex itself felt a bit short and perfunctionary in the set too (here's the setup, here's a blowjob, stick it in and we're done), where you're sets usually feel a lot more expansive in that regard - but it was sandwiched between two pay sets and you seem to be in a position where that kind of thing is taking precedence for personal/financial reasons - so I would assume it's more down to that than to anything else.
Regardless, thanks for the set and looking forward to more comic style stuff from you in future.
Excellent work. It is great to see some narrative context enhancing the visual work, giving it that extra edge that makes it more poignant/effective. I enjoy this kind of pairing and the consensual and mutual enjoyment makes it more interesting. The extra work involved was sure worth it.
Oh boy, how could i have missed this one?! This is a huge step into the right direction for erotic art: Context! The choice of DC characters is nice as well. There are a lot of interesting pairing ideas there, with so many hot girls, monsters and beasts... I'd suggest some stuff, but i don't know if you'd be interested. Here's hoping more of these little stories get made. Thanks.
Excellent. Your work lends itself to narrative well. I'm always disappointed when something like A Fools Errand or Volunteers doesn't continue. Hopefully this will have a longer life.
ReplyDeleteWow, 3 days and zero comments. Guess this kills the chance of a spinoff/sequel. 8(
ReplyDeleteWell, I for one just saw it and loved it. Two thumbs up!
ReplyDeleteIt was great! I hope you continue this collaboration.
ReplyDeletelooks realy great. I hope that Catwoman still appears in a large wallpaper in here Costume
ReplyDeleteHmmm.... posted my appreciation yesterday but it's gone. Great stuff anyway.
ReplyDeleteAnon "Hmmm.... posted my appreciation yesterday but it's gone. Great stuff anyway."
ReplyDeleteIt went to the spam folder for some reason o_O,
I know it sucks, but given the extra time invested in these stories I can't do them too often, and there's always the possibility that some of the participants leaves or something else happens.
I'm not sure you check older posts to actually see this, but I'm gonna post some feedback just in case you do. I liked the set as another one of your sets - but I can't say I liked it as a Catwoman set. If that makes any sense. The set is really nicely put together, with some nice panel composition and the model looks as hot as your models always do.
ReplyDeleteAnd yet, after the first few pages there's nothing there to indicate it's supposed to be Catwoman. Which, to me, kind of defeats the purpose in doing a parody/reference set in the first place. I think Catwoman is just a bad choice of character in that regard though. There's nothing distinctive about her hair, her body, her accessories etc. to clearly mark a given character as her once you've taken off the catsuit. I think you should have either had her keep the catsuit on (even though I'm not a fan of that particular suit's design - especially the hood) or used a character with more distinctive design elements altogether. Wonder Woman would be good for this for instance, since even if you take off her clothes she has rather distinct accessories you can keep one or two of in the form of her belt, bracers, tiara and earrings. Or Zatanna, who you just need to keep the top hat on for really. And so on.
Additionally, I think it was a bit pointless to include the nurse given that she didn't actually participate in events. Chekov's gun and all that. You'd probably have been better served (and had a bit of an easier time making the set) if you just had Selina tending him from the start. Finally, I would point out that it's a bit of an odd writing choice to have Selina cast as a villain, in a group of villains - and then have her keep talking about heroism. Those lines just seem odd to me, and would probably work better rephrased to say that she's rewarding Grodd for his help or something instead.
I could complain that the sex itself felt a bit short and perfunctionary in the set too (here's the setup, here's a blowjob, stick it in and we're done), where you're sets usually feel a lot more expansive in that regard - but it was sandwiched between two pay sets and you seem to be in a position where that kind of thing is taking precedence for personal/financial reasons - so I would assume it's more down to that than to anything else.
Regardless, thanks for the set and looking forward to more comic style stuff from you in future.
Excellent work. It is great to see some narrative context enhancing the visual work, giving it that extra edge that makes it more poignant/effective. I enjoy this kind of pairing and the consensual and mutual enjoyment makes it more interesting. The extra work involved was sure worth it.
ReplyDeleteOh boy, how could i have missed this one?!
ReplyDeleteThis is a huge step into the right direction for erotic art: Context!
The choice of DC characters is nice as well. There are a lot of interesting pairing ideas there, with so many hot girls, monsters and beasts... I'd suggest some stuff, but i don't know if you'd be interested.
Here's hoping more of these little stories get made.
Thanks.
How do i read the comic?
ReplyDeleteJEDIDIAH, download it where it says: Download: MEGA
ReplyDeletethat was the best thing ive seen, you gotta do more
ReplyDeletethis might be weird request but could you do a jane goodall and kirchak cg? Jane accidentally glimpses his gorilla dick and wants it bad...
ReplyDeletelol, she was quite cute as a teenager, but I'm already doing something similar:
ReplyDeletehttp://vaesark.blogspot.com.es/2015/08/of-things-to-come.html
The second girl will have lots of fun with gorillas.