Finaly, i like this girl ! The giant rat is excellent, i hop he is used in another set !
They should have a set on his own ^^
Too bad that in page 12, the witch does not suck the long tongue of the giant rat! But everything else is perfect! Also, I will like to see the witch add a strawberry at the end even if it is optional! A strawberry is still sexy in these cases!
I love holding the soricière, pity it removes so fast ^^
Apparently it takes 3 spider eggs to the recipe but we see that 2, is this a mistake or it is due to the field of vision? His would have been nice to see the place in the cauldron!
I have a question: Why does it seek to make a love potion knowing she has no problem getting that she want in to domain? Is it for her or for someone else?
Cannot emphasize this enough: her face, her features, her slenderness. Sold. You have GOT to use her again.
(Mixed feelings about her hair. Would probably prefer her younger sister with straight hair, but both are/would be awesome.)
In the interest of feedback, here goes:
Did I mention the girl?
Absolutely stunning. Whatever derivative models you use, they should mirror these attributes.
Angelic face. Super slender. (In particular, scenes 46, 10, 12, 26, 32, 54.) Those two features on at least ONE girl in every set, and your sales double. At least.
Also, your best scenes focus on HER.
[Seems her neck and calves might have been a tiny bit more slender. 5%.]
By the by, some ways you can tap into good fetishes relatively easily: slightly longer necks, and longer tongues. Not grotesquely longer, but just a bit more. At the upper edge of normal. Licking with a long tongue is beyond awesome. [And when it's the monster's tongue, it should also be not too overly large; that kills it.]
Your noses, mouths, and chins are perfect.
The nipples might be a tiny bit more pronounced. Slightly larger aereola; a bit more pink, here. [Her toenails would likely also be painted, as with her fingernails.]
Part II:
An interesting storyline.
A great storyline, in fact. Imaginative, and, ah, filled with lots of ingredients and potential. Could carry this many sets more. Her sister, her Amazonian clan . . .
Part III:
Contrast. This seems much better than the too-close contrast in the earlier sets. The darkish background sets of her pale skin nicely. Well done.
Part IV: The Monsters.
Mixed feelings on the rat. *Very* well done in most respects. Just a bit odd. [e.g., excellent cock, but foreplay with the sharp rat claws?] I'm generally not turned on by the too-odd-monster effect. Could be just me.
Monster #2 (scenes 17-27) was a turn-off. Again, flabby and unattractive in a negative way. The only scene that were okay (but only just) pretty much cut him out.
Gorilla, excellent. This goes to the semi-human nature of primates.
Giant spider. Not quite turnoff, and a few interesting aspects (such as the cock). But not generally favorable. Scene 50 would have been far sexier had the inflation been 1/3 as large, with much less cum blowout. Or, two scenes.
Last monster. Good. The problem when their size is too disproportionately large is that it then becomes unbelievable, which makes it less sexy. Scene 57, same.
A way to quadruple sales (on top of doubling them above)?
For each set of 60, how about a "pre" set of 30 that would be just studies of the girl. No monster. No real scene, or perhaps just the same background, or a bed or desk or such.
[Annika is one of my very favorite models, but honestly the nasty scene is a huge turn-off. Re-issue that set in just a plain room, and I'll buy it again. Happily.]
Offer the main and "pre" as separate sets.
I can guarantee you that with a girl such as this one, I would buy them both without hesitation. I bet lots of others would too.
You could also go further: make a second set of 60, and do 2-3 variations:
Super-slender A-Cup; Super-slender C-Cup; more curvy DD+ model. 20 studies for each. Various poses, etc. Awesome.
Throw in a few pregnant scenes for each. [THE sexist is a barely-pregnant girl. 4-5 months on a slender frame. Beyond words.]
I'd go straight for the first two and ignore the third, but other fans might do the opposite.
"Those two features on at least ONE girl in every set, and your sales double. At least."
As a matter of fact the most popular girls are those with normal or big breasts, like Jill/Seldanna or Elina/Powergirl. But I like variety in this regard so I'll keep doing them of all sizes.
"By the by, some ways you can tap into good fetishes relatively easily: slightly longer necks, and longer tongues. Not grotesquely longer, but just a bit more. At the upper edge of normal. Licking with a long tongue is beyond awesome. [And when it's the monster's tongue, it should also be not too overly large; that kills it.]"
Yeah, I think I can add slightly longer tongues for the girl. I completely disagree with regards to the very long tongues for the monsters, i like them a lot, specially when they are long enough to warp around the girl's bodies, or shove it down their throats.
"Monster #2 (scenes 17-27) was a turn-off. Again, flabby and unattractive in a negative way. The only scene that were okay (but only just) pretty much cut him out."
Sorry to hear that, but I do like them "flabby and unattractive" not much you can do in this regard to change my mind.
"Last monster. Good. The problem when their size is too disproportionately large is that it then becomes unbelievable, which makes it less sexy. Scene 57, same."
welp, like most fetishes, people who are not into them will ignore it at best, or feel turned off at worst. There's no way around it, if you are suggesting that I should not it at all then I'm afraid that I will disappoint you.
"For each set of 60, how about a "pre" set of 30 that would be just studies of the girl. No monster. No real scene, or perhaps just the same background, or a bed or desk or such."
I guess that I could perhaps increase the number of pics of the previews of the girls, but I do not intent to sale those.
"[Annika is one of my very favorite models, but honestly the nasty scene is a huge turn-off. Re-issue that set in just a plain room, and I'll buy it again. Happily.]"
welp, I like the nasty scenes, and although I do not do them all that often you will have to expect them every now and then.
"Offer the main and "pre" as separate sets.
I can guarantee you that with a girl such as this one, I would buy them both without hesitation. I bet lots of others would too."
nah, I'll share those for free at my blog as always.
"
You could also go further: make a second set of 60, and do 2-3 variations:
Super-slender A-Cup; Super-slender C-Cup; more curvy DD+ model. 20 studies for each. Various poses, etc. Awesome.
Throw in a few pregnant scenes for each. [THE sexist is a barely-pregnant girl. 4-5 months on a slender frame. Beyond words.]"
rendering times don't allow me to do anything like that. I'm already rendering as much as I can.
I see that you are mostly interested in the girls, drop me an email and we can discuss this further.
wow, just wow, i love this girl, and i haven't even bought the set yet. she is amazing. especially in the fourth preview picture, i love her petite look please keep on creating fantastic stuff :D
I love when you mix many animals/monsters. :O
ReplyDeletewell, I like variety :3
DeleteFinaly, i like this girl ! The giant rat is excellent, i hop he is used in another set !
ReplyDeleteThey should have a set on his own ^^
Too bad that in page 12, the witch does not suck the long tongue of the giant rat! But everything else is perfect! Also, I will like to see the witch add a strawberry at the end even if it is optional! A strawberry is still sexy in these cases!
I love holding the soricière, pity it removes so fast ^^
Apparently it takes 3 spider eggs to the recipe but we see that 2, is this a mistake or it is due to the field of vision? His would have been nice to see the place in the cauldron!
I have a question: Why does it seek to make a love potion knowing she has no problem getting that she want in to domain? Is it for her or for someone else?
Unfortunately the rat's tongue is too rigid for licking/kissing.
DeleteThere are 3 eggs but the third one is a bit hard to see due to the perspective.
The potion is for someone else of course, she has no problem getting men/males to fuck her ;D
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ReplyDeleteBought this one without hesitation. Reason? HER.
Cannot emphasize this enough: her face, her features, her slenderness. Sold. You have GOT to use her again.
(Mixed feelings about her hair. Would probably prefer her younger sister with straight hair, but both are/would be awesome.)
In the interest of feedback, here goes:
Did I mention the girl?
Absolutely stunning. Whatever derivative models you use, they should mirror these attributes.
Angelic face. Super slender. (In particular, scenes 46, 10, 12, 26, 32, 54.) Those two features on at least ONE girl in every set, and your sales double. At least.
Also, your best scenes focus on HER.
[Seems her neck and calves might have been a tiny bit more slender. 5%.]
By the by, some ways you can tap into good fetishes relatively easily: slightly longer necks, and longer tongues. Not grotesquely longer, but just a bit more. At the upper edge of normal. Licking with a long tongue is beyond awesome. [And when it's the monster's tongue, it should also be not too overly large; that kills it.]
Your noses, mouths, and chins are perfect.
The nipples might be a tiny bit more pronounced. Slightly larger aereola; a bit more pink, here. [Her toenails would likely also be painted, as with her fingernails.]
Part II:
An interesting storyline.
A great storyline, in fact. Imaginative, and, ah, filled with lots of ingredients and potential. Could carry this many sets more. Her sister, her Amazonian clan . . .
Part III:
Contrast. This seems much better than the too-close contrast in the earlier sets. The darkish background sets of her pale skin nicely. Well done.
Part IV: The Monsters.
Mixed feelings on the rat. *Very* well done in most respects. Just a bit odd. [e.g., excellent cock, but foreplay with the sharp rat claws?] I'm generally not turned on by the too-odd-monster effect. Could be just me.
Monster #2 (scenes 17-27) was a turn-off. Again, flabby and unattractive in a negative way. The only scene that were okay (but only just) pretty much cut him out.
Gorilla, excellent. This goes to the semi-human nature of primates.
Giant spider. Not quite turnoff, and a few interesting aspects (such as the cock). But not generally favorable. Scene 50 would have been far sexier had the inflation been 1/3 as large, with much less cum blowout. Or, two scenes.
Last monster. Good. The problem when their size is too disproportionately large is that it then becomes unbelievable, which makes it less sexy. Scene 57, same.
If I didn't say it before . . . awesome girl.
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DeleteA way to quadruple sales (on top of doubling them above)?
For each set of 60, how about a "pre" set of 30 that would be just studies of the girl. No monster. No real scene, or perhaps just the same background, or a bed or desk or such.
[Annika is one of my very favorite models, but honestly the nasty scene is a huge turn-off. Re-issue that set in just a plain room, and I'll buy it again. Happily.]
Offer the main and "pre" as separate sets.
I can guarantee you that with a girl such as this one, I would buy them both without hesitation. I bet lots of others would too.
You could also go further: make a second set of 60, and do 2-3 variations:
Super-slender A-Cup; Super-slender C-Cup; more curvy DD+ model. 20 studies for each. Various poses, etc. Awesome.
Throw in a few pregnant scenes for each. [THE sexist is a barely-pregnant girl. 4-5 months on a slender frame. Beyond words.]
I'd go straight for the first two and ignore the third, but other fans might do the opposite.
Lets see...
Delete"Those two features on at least ONE girl in every set, and your sales double. At least."
As a matter of fact the most popular girls are those with normal or big breasts, like Jill/Seldanna or Elina/Powergirl. But I like variety in this regard so I'll keep doing them of all sizes.
"By the by, some ways you can tap into good fetishes relatively easily: slightly longer necks, and longer tongues. Not grotesquely longer, but just a bit more. At the upper edge of normal. Licking with a long tongue is beyond awesome. [And when it's the monster's tongue, it should also be not too overly large; that kills it.]"
Yeah, I think I can add slightly longer tongues for the girl. I completely disagree with regards to the very long tongues for the monsters, i like them a lot, specially when they are long enough to warp around the girl's bodies, or shove it down their throats.
"Monster #2 (scenes 17-27) was a turn-off. Again, flabby and unattractive in a negative way. The only scene that were okay (but only just) pretty much cut him out."
Sorry to hear that, but I do like them "flabby and unattractive" not much you can do in this regard to change my mind.
"Last monster. Good. The problem when their size is too disproportionately large is that it then becomes unbelievable, which makes it less sexy. Scene 57, same."
welp, like most fetishes, people who are not into them will ignore it at best, or feel turned off at worst. There's no way around it, if you are suggesting that I should not it at all then I'm afraid that I will disappoint you.
"For each set of 60, how about a "pre" set of 30 that would be just studies of the girl. No monster. No real scene, or perhaps just the same background, or a bed or desk or such."
I guess that I could perhaps increase the number of pics of the previews of the girls, but I do not intent to sale those.
"[Annika is one of my very favorite models, but honestly the nasty scene is a huge turn-off. Re-issue that set in just a plain room, and I'll buy it again. Happily.]"
welp, I like the nasty scenes, and although I do not do them all that often you will have to expect them every now and then.
"Offer the main and "pre" as separate sets.
I can guarantee you that with a girl such as this one, I would buy them both without hesitation. I bet lots of others would too."
nah, I'll share those for free at my blog as always.
"
You could also go further: make a second set of 60, and do 2-3 variations:
Super-slender A-Cup; Super-slender C-Cup; more curvy DD+ model. 20 studies for each. Various poses, etc. Awesome.
Throw in a few pregnant scenes for each. [THE sexist is a barely-pregnant girl. 4-5 months on a slender frame. Beyond words.]"
rendering times don't allow me to do anything like that. I'm already rendering as much as I can.
I see that you are mostly interested in the girls, drop me an email and we can discuss this further.
wow, just wow, i love this girl, and i haven't even bought the set yet.
ReplyDeleteshe is amazing. especially in the fourth preview picture, i love her petite look
please keep on creating fantastic stuff :D